二、意义阐释:全文主体第二段(4)

小波妞:那2009年呢?

道长:2009年的人物是很多年轻人:These teenagers symbolize a large number of young people(这些青少年象征着很多年轻人);事物是蜘蛛网:The spider web epitomizes the Internet(这张蜘蛛网是互联网的缩影);动作是这些人被蜘蛛网分开:The fact that these young people are separated by the spider web suggests that a lot of people are reluctant to approach others(这些年轻人被蜘蛛网分开这个事实证明了很多人不愿意与他人接近).

小波妞:2010年真题怎么写啊?没有人物啊。

道长:可以先写三个主要事物啊,第一个事物是一只火锅:The hot pot represents cultural integration(这只火锅代表了文化融合);第?个事物是火锅里的东西:Confucianism, Buddhism, Taoism, the Enlightenment, humanism and post-modernism are naturally associated with multi-cultural ingredients(儒、佛、道、启蒙、人本、后现代自然与多元文化元素联系起来);最后翻译文字说明:The fact that the cultural hot pot is both delicious and nutritious indicates that cultural blending should be encouraged and maintained(这只文化火锅既美味又营养这个事实证明了我们应该鼓励和保持文化融合).

小波妞:联系现实这种写法太好用了,不需要太多构思。那?四种论证手段呢?

道长:正反论证。2000、2009年的大作文全国第一就使用了这种写法。例如2009年的文字说明是“网络的近与远”,必须使用正反论证,网络的优缺点缺一不可。当年全国第一的第二段是这样写的:From the cartoon, we can conclude that the cartoonist wants to convey such a message: with the popularity of computers, people from all over the world become nearer by using the Internet to communicate with each other. Meanwhile, people also become far away from their friends. All of us accept the fact that the development of the Internet brings lots of conveniences to our daily life, for instance, we can buy a book on the net instead of going to a bookstore. Besides, we can communicate with our friends on the net without going out of home. But we can’t ignore the other side of these: the time we spend with friends or family becomes less. And we hardly see them once in a week. It will make us feel lonely if we continue to use the tool on the net to talk with friends instead of talking with them on the phone or going out with them.这里面既有正反论证,也有举例论证,使用了两大论证手段。

小波妞:第二段中间的论证部分清楚了,那第二段最后一个部分写什么呢?

道长:小结啊,概括论证、总结本段,与第二段主题句前后呼应。例如2007年全国第一第二段的小结是这样写的:So, with confidence and the right assessment of difficulties, try and exert your strength, and then you will overcome all problems(因此,拥有信心和对困难的正确估计,并且竭尽全力,我们就将解决所有的问题).第二段也是总分总结构,如果不?小结就是总分结构。

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