洪涛是一名相当优秀的学生。他在广东商学院学会计， 拿过两次奖学金， 还担任过班里的体育委员。他本人也确实特别喜欢体育， 他是一个长跑健将， 曾经在校运会上得过1500米亚军！（点评： 每一小的开头是概括， 然后分项支持刚才的观点， 这种方法和自我介绍完全一样， 值得推荐！切忌从头到尾罗列很多信息泛泛而谈， 一定要谈出一两个有事实有数字的亮点来， 才能让听众觉得有意思。）
除了学习， 洪涛也做过很多兼职。其中包括在会计师事务所实习， 还做过促销员和导游。最有意思的是， 洪涛在去年春节的花市上和同学摆了一个摊， 5天时间挣了2000块钱！（点评： 再一次用数字作为亮点， 激发听众的兴趣。）
这就是我对洪涛的初步了解， 谢谢大家！
（点评： 介绍别人和自我介绍的次序完全一致： 先介绍姓名、 家乡， 再介绍在校经历和校外活动。）
介绍其他候选人英文示范
Now, let me introduce Mr. Zhang Hongtao to all of you. Hongtao wants us to use his English name, Hank, h-a-n-k. Hank means "a brave boy" in English.
Hank is from Shanshui, but his parents were from Inner Mongolia, I think you agree with me that Hank looks like a man from the grassland!
Hank is an excellent student in Guangdong Commercial College. He won scholarships twice, and he was in charge of sports matters in his class. You can tell that Hank loves sports. He is good at long-distance running, he was the runner-up in the 1,500 meter race in his school!
Besides studying, Hank held some part-time jobs, including intern at an accounting firm, promotion assistant and tour guide. Most interestingly, Hank made more than 2,000 RMB in five days when he sold flowers last Spring Festival. What a rich young man!
That's something I've learnt about Hank. Thanks for listening!
